mfr test

 


REVISION5

 

kmcgerald

11 years 2 months ago

I like revision 1 or 2.  Revision 3 has too much space between the quote and the Join us line.

 

Might consider moving "One software to rule them all" to the bottom under the logo rather than over it.

Cix

11 years 1 month ago

Revision 5 is more clear, anyway I suggest the following changes:

1) the phrase 'join us....' should be smaller

 2) on top should be the phrase 'one software to rule...'; I think this phrase describe in few words what is mrl